"Spring is Coming"
There isn't much new to share this weekend. I'm working through those revisions on The Tale of the Drakanox. Currently I'm on chapters eight and nine of twenty-one chapters, so approaching the midpoint. There's a lot of focus on Ar-Lizelle and the world she moves through as a high-powered mage. From the outside it appears mages are totally in control, but here we see how the mages are obstacles to each other.
March 11, 2023
So far, I've trimmed about 300 words from 138,000. That either means the story was tight to begin with, and the length is what it needed to be for the number of characters, or it means I still have too much backstory.