- Fang Marsh: Got to the end of the second chapter (if novellas have chapters) but I need to totally do the chapter over. Meven and her foundling mage are doing stuff and feeling out their relationship, but it's taking too long. This one can't wait for revisions.
- Fang Marsh: The kid got his bath. After a tantrum, Meven started teaching him to control his magic. Up to 13,300 words now, but the page count is 35. Not a good match. Oh well, that's what revision is for.
